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Groups - AMQP Core Specification - Working Draft 4 uploaded

From: Ram Jeyaraman <[email protected]>
To: [email protected]
Date: Thu, 02 Feb 2012 23:39:00 -0000

My comments on the latest Working Draft: 1. Section 0.3 Acknowledgements a. Add Mr. Stanley Lewis (Progress Software) b. Add Ms. Kimberly Palko (Red Hat) c. Change affiliation of John O’Hara to Individual d. For reference, here is the roster http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/amqp/members/roster.php 2. Appendix A DTD is missing in the PDF document. Here are some comments from Chet (TC admin): 1. Add Revision History a. This could be a new section (0.4 Revision History) in Part 0: Overview chapter. Just a high-level history is sufficient. For example, a table with columns (Revision number, Revision date, Description of changes) and four rows each one corresponding to Working Draft 1 through 4. For example, the first row { Working Draft 1, <date>, <list of issues addressed> }. The revision history is useful for reviewers who have not been a part of the specification development and is particularly useful during public review. 2. Front page a. The HTML and PDF versions use different capitalizations for “This version”, “Previous version”, “Latest version”, “Additional artifacts”, “Related work”, “Citation format”. Suggest using the capitalizations as indicated above in both the PDF and HTML formats. b. Additional artifacts i. Suggest changing the list item “Appendix A: DTD” to “XML Document Type Definition (DTD)” and remove the prepend “Appendix A: ” From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Rob Godfrey Sent: Thursday, February 02, 2012 1:41 PM To: [email protected] Subject: [amqp] Groups - AMQP Core Specification - Working Draft 4 uploaded Submitter's message The first upload of Working Draft 4 seemed to have come from a bad build, with some links trying to go to wd03 rather than wd04 - have uploaded a rebuilt version. I've not upped the version number as there have been no changes to the document in SVN, This is merely a rebuild. thanks to Dave (again) for pointing this out :-) Cheers, Rob -- Mr. Rob Godfrey Document Name : AMQP Core Specification - Working Draft 4 Description Updated from working draft 3 to correct the copyright date from 2011 to 2012 in the PDF file (First upload of WD04 seemed to have a bad build, with some links trying to go to wd03 rather than wd04 - have uploaded a rebuilt version) Download Latest Revision Public Download Link Submitter : Mr. Rob Godfrey Group : OASIS Advanced Message Queuing Protocol (AMQP) TC Folder : Working Documents Date submitted : 2012-02-02 13:40:31 Revision : 1