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Additional editorial comments to SMP 1.0 CSPRD02
Dear all
While preparing for our meeting on Wednesday I identified some additional (purely editorial) issues with SMP 1.0 CSPRD02:
1) Section 2.3.3.2: The line numbering has not been reset, but continues the line numbering from 2.3.2.2. First line should be “01”.
2) Section 2.4.7.1: In the HTML version ( http://docs.oasis-open.org/bdxr/bdx-smp/v1.0/csprd02/bdx-smp-v1.0-csprd02.html)
and PDF version ( http://docs.oasis-open.org/bdxr/bdx-smp/v1.0/csprd02/bdx-smp-v1.0-csprd02.pdf) , the pseudo-schema has line numbering (labelling the single line as
line “04”). The normative (Word) version does not.
3) When we added section 3.2.1 we created a hanging paragraph in 3.2.
4) Section 3.2.1: In the HTML version ( http://docs.oasis-open.org/bdxr/bdx-smp/v1.0/csprd02/bdx-smp-v1.0-csprd02.html)
and PDF version ( http://docs.oasis-open.org/bdxr/bdx-smp/v1.0/csprd02/bdx-smp-v1.0-csprd02.pdf) , the samples have line numbering (labelling the single lines “05” and
“06” respectively). The normative (Word) version does not.
5) Section 3.4 has a hanging paragraph.
6) Appendix C3: Line numbering has not been reset, but continues the line numbering from the example in C2. First line should be “01”.
7) Appendix D (Revision History) should be labelled “non-normative” for consistency (or should be removed entirely, contemplating that the next Committee Specification will be SMP 1.0 Candidate OASIS Standard).
I’m adding the above to a new comment resolution log document, which I will upload in a bit.
Best regards,
Kenneth
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