[OASIS Issue Tracker] (CAMP-222) 4 Platform Deployment Package - confusing

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Anish Karmarkar commented on CAMP-222:
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This is a TAB issue. Original issue https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/TAB-1554

> 4 Platform Deployment Package - confusing
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>                 Key: CAMP-222
>                 URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/CAMP-222
>             Project: OASIS Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>         Environment: Style
>            Reporter: Chet Ensign
>            Priority: Minor
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> The first hanging paragraph under 4 Platform Deployment Package reads:
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> The Platform Deployment Package (PDP) ensures portability across platforms. It can be created by a platform to export to another platform, which then imports it. It can also be created by an Application Development Environment running locally or deployed as Software as a Service in the cloud. The PDP (and the Plan file, see Section 4.2, “Plan Overview”) defines the formats for on-boarding new applications onto a CAMP-enabled Provider.
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> The purpose of this paragraph isn't clear. Do you mean to say that a PDP archive can be created by means not defined by this specification? I'm not sure of the difference between import and "on-boarding new applications onto a CAMP-enabled Provider." I assume existing applications can be imported as well. Yes?
> Suggestion: The paragraph specifies no normative content nor does it advance the defining of a PDP. Just delete it.



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