Re: [ebxml-jc] Technical whitepaper comments

[Monica J Martin <Monica.Martin@Sun.COM>]

Ian,
A few questions:

   1. Can you give me some examples of other than BT patterns in ebBP
      with page 4 comment?
   2. Can I still say that multi-hop and intermediaries are under
      evaluation for v3.0 or not?
   3. When you reference WS-S and WS-I - What tokens may be supported?

Thanks.

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> General
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> Difficult to find things
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> Add page number/ section numbers/ contents
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> Final edit issue
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> Page 3 / Messaging Overview
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> “The ebMS was developed to provide for secure”
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> Change “for” to “the”
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> Low
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> Page 3 / Messaging Overview
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> Support for FTP is not widespread
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> Remove “FTP”
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> Medium
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> Page 4 / Overview
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> Message exchange patterns. Need to reference multiple exchange 
> patterns – this is referenced in the later section but needs higher 
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> Change to be “Multiple message exchange patterns including push and 
> pull that map to different type of business transactions.”
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> Medium
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> Page 4 / Last section
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> Multi-hop may not be supported in version 3.0
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> Remove last sentence from paragraph.
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> High
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> Page 5 / after V3.0 before Business scenario
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> Add the list of referenced specs for V3.0. This may be moved form Page 
> 4 Overview
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> Add The following spec. references
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> WS-I Basic Profile, WS-I attachment profile (/Jacques what exactly is 
> this called?/), WS-Security, WS-Reliability…
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> Low
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> General
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> We need to come up with a cover page that has some impact but is 
> simple to understand
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> Add a cover with the title of ebXML Technical overview with a jigsaw 
> with each piece labelled with an ebXML component between to buildings 
> or such like.
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> Low – Final edit
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> Ian Jones
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> Chair ebXML Messaging Services TC
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