[OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (ENERGYINTEROP-344) Verbiagechange

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William Cox commented on ENERGYINTEROP-344:
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"More granular" is ambiguous. Suggest something like "finer-grained" which is unambiguous.

> Verbiage change
> ---------------
>
>                 Key: ENERGYINTEROP-344
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ENERGYINTEROP-344
>             Project: OASIS Energy Interoperation TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>    Affects Versions: wd22
>            Reporter: Gerald Gray
>            Assignee: William Cox
>            Priority: Minor
>
> lines 18 - 20 currently read:
> These changes will create more granular energy transactions, more granular in temporal changes in price, and more granular in territory.

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