RE: [energyinterop] [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (ENERGYINTEROP-347) Consolidated list of verbiage adjustments

["Gerald Gray" <gerald.gray@guiding-principle.com>]

Hi Bill, I thought I would shoot you a note regarding "Watching" an issue in jira.

I "think" this is the difference between other jira notifications.  The subject line contains "Updated:"

Other than that it is difficult to distinguish between that and other notifications that come out. In this example I was notified that you made an update, but not what the update was.  A link is provided that takes me directly to the issue and in this case it appears that you assigned some items to TC.  However, in other issues I could not tell what the update was.  There didn't appear to be a status change, comment, sub-tasking, or resolution verbiage added.  

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Subject: [energyinterop] [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (ENERGYINTEROP-347) Consolidated list of verbiage adjustments


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William Cox updated ENERGYINTEROP-347:
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    Environment: Gerald Gray

> Consolidated list of verbiage adjustments
> -----------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: ENERGYINTEROP-347
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ENERGYINTEROP-347
>             Project: OASIS Energy Interoperation TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>    Affects Versions: wd22
>         Environment: Gerald Gray
>            Reporter: Gerald Gray
>            Assignee: William Cox
>            Priority: Minor
>
> Line 329 - 300 change to:  four types of prices are used:
> Line 353-354 "locked down" colloquialism, 
>    From:  The prices may be fixed tariffs absolutely locked down
>    To: The price may be fixed with no changes allowed to the tariffs
> Line 466 should be "mirrors"
> Line 573 paraphrase should be in quotes:  "I won't turn on any resource for less than $100."
> Line 484 should be "actors" 
> Line 494 from: "In this section, we clarify terminology for roles..."
> 	To:  In this section terminology for roles is clarified
> Line 498 from: At this level of description, we ignore the presence of application level acknowledgement of invocations
> 	To: At this level of description the presence of application level acknowledgement is ignored...
> Line 503 change to:  The typical push or pull patterns for interactions are also ignored but deferred to later sections.
> Footnote:  Strike "we are indebted", Virtual End Note, Source: EPRI, http://my.epri.com/portal/server.pt?Abstract_id=000000000001020432  
> Line 516 change to: There is no hierarchy implied by these examples, they are used to show how the pairwise
> Line 534change to:  Two structured roles in each interaction have been defined
> Line 547 strike "as we have seen"
> Line 548 change to: the pattern is recursive as shown in Figure 5-45-4
> Line 557 change to: In this section the interaction patterns are described of the services for demand response respectively
> Line 560 change to: By applying the recursive definitions of VTN and VEN, specific services will be described in the next sections.
> Figure 5-6 should the R in DR be capitalized per the camelcase guidance in section 1.6 as DR is an acronym?
> Line 608 - 609 change to:  The power object in EMIX can include specification of voltage, hertz, quality and other features.
> Line 685 change to: In the following sections services and operations consistent with [SOA-RM] are described.
> Line 687 change to: The roles are indicated by the table headings; Service Consumer for the actor or role that
> Line 690 change to:  This terminology is used through all the service definitions that are described in this standard.
> Line 705 change to:  The services are divided into four broad categories

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