[OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (ODATA-385) Overview wording suggestion

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Michael Pizzo updated ODATA-385:
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    Proposal: 
Change: "The OData Protocol is an application-level protocol for interacting with data via RESTful web services." to:

The OData Protocol is an application-level protocol for interacting with data via RESTful interfaces.

  was:
Change: "The OData Protocol is an application-level protocol for interacting with data via RESTful web services." to:

The OData Protocol is an application-level protocol for interacting with data services via RESTful interfaces.


> Overview wording suggestion
> ---------------------------
>
>                 Key: ODATA-385
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ODATA-385
>             Project: OASIS Open Data Protocol (OData) TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: OData Protocol 
>    Affects Versions: V4.0_CSD01
>            Reporter: Patrick Durusau
>            Priority: Minor
>
> The opening sentence now reads: "The OData Protocol is an application-level protocol for interacting with data via RESTful web services."
> As a new comer that strikes me as odd because OData describes OData services with which I interact.
> Making me think"
> The OData Protocol is an application-level protocol for interacting with data services via RESTful interfaces.
> is closer to the mark. 

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