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[Michael Willett]

Peter Brown has just uploaded both Word and PDF versions of our revised draft deliverable. By way of explanation: Since our last  telecom on 12 Jan, a small editing committee (John Sabo, Dawn Jutla, Peter Brown, Michael Willett) has been engaged in reviewing/revising the draft deliverable. The process: We handed off the “pen” in rapid successive fashion. Each pen owner would make the edits (with Tracking)  that they had recently suggested in e-mails; plus, react to the edits from the previous pen owner. These iterations are reflected in the revision history in the Appendix. Easy edits were quickly resolved; more in depth modifications were discussed off-line and in added comments to the draft. A few comments were left in the draft, for discussion. Periodically, we produced a ‘clean’ copy. In this way, we evolved the draft to its present state. Some highlights:     - format re-structured to the OASIS TC specification format (thanks to Peter)     - identification/distinction of the PMRM MODEL and the MRTHODOLOGY,       both in words and the two graphics     - series of Tasks to anchor the Methodology     - running illustrative examples of each step/Task in the methodology     - glossary (only terms actively used in draft; not a comprehensive privacy dictionary) Please review the draft BEFORE our formal telecom on       Thursday, 8 March, at 11 -12 Eastern The editing committee will discuss the rationale for the present draft, but we would certainly welcome your input. Michael