Fwd: [soa-rm-ra] Issues - Call for comments on Version 0.2

[Danny Thornton <danny_thornton2@yahoo.com>]

Jeff's issues have not been captured in the KAVI
issues spread sheet so I am forwarding his previous
message with "Issues" added to the subject line and I
am also sending the message to Don Flinn, the issues
manager.

Danny

--- "Jeffrey A. Estefan"
<jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov> wrote:

> From: "Jeffrey A. Estefan"
> <jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov>
> To: <soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org>
> Date: Fri, 7 Sep 2007 11:10:19 -0700
> Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Re: [soa-rm] [soa-rm-ra] Call
> for comments on Version 0.2 (Second time lucky?)
> 
> Don and Frank,
> 
> I started making a pass through Section 4 of the
> Reference Architecture 
> working draft 0.2 and I realized it's still kind of
> a mess so I gave up.  I 
> saw a lot of draft text, particularly Section 4.2,
> therefore, I'll wait 
> until others have had their say and updates made,
> then I'll put my two cents 
> forth.  It seems the focus of discussion on the SC
> call these days has been 
> on the subject of Governance so once the dust
> settles, we can return to the 
> topic of Realizing a SOA View.
> 
> In the meantime, I've attached an issues list that
> addresses some editorial 
> comments (very minor ones but important for
> readability of the document) 
> that target the earlier sections with the caveat
> that I did not focus much 
> attention on the language of Section 2 -
> Requirements.  This is something I 
> think we'll want to return to when we're closer to
> wrapping up Section 5.
> 
> Cheers...
> 
>  - Jeff E. 
> 



       
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