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RE: [tgf] New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description
I'm on the case!
:-) Peter F Brown Independent Consultant www.peterfbrown.com @pensivepeter +1.310.694.2278 Until 9 January: +32.472.027.811 Sent from my Phone - Apologies for typos, levity and brevity - it's hard to type on a moving planet
From: John Borras Sent: Monday, 28 February, 2011 6:21
To: 'Greenaway Nigel'
Cc: 'TGF TC List '
Subject: RE: [tgf] New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description
> Nig > > >
> Sincere thanks for your thorough sanity check. I'm sure Peter will respond
> in due course to all of them. > > >
> John > > >
>
From: Greenaway Nigel [mailto:[email protected]]
> Sent: 28 February 2011 12:25
>
To: TGF TC List
>
Subject: [tgf] New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description > > >
> Line 754 I believe the brackets around "and beyond" should be removed. The
> external stakeholders in the model should be a major constituency (see line
> 757)and the brackets diminish their apparent importance. >
> Regards >
> Nig >
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