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[Peter Brown]

Hi: We are due to discuss and vote on approving TGF Primer Working Draft 02 as a formal Committee Note Draft. There have been no substantial new comments or issues raised, but only a small number of editorial changes, that have been mentioned on the list. To clarify therefore, I would like us to vote to approve v2 with the following changes : Lines 241 and 275 – CSF diagram updated from ‘Do-Ability’ to ‘Achievable Delivery’; Lines 432 and 1332 – change ‘Channel Management’ to ‘Channel Transformation’; Line 1210 – remove line and comment regarding reference to IDM standards; Line 1301 – change ‘Web 2.0 technologies’ to ‘technologies’; Add names of editors; Add names of TC members to list in Acknowledgements, and that the duly modified draft be assigned v3 and submitted to TC Admin for approval… Talk soon! Regards, Peter Peter F Brown Independent Consultant Transforming our Relationships with Information Technologies Web www.peterfbrown.com Blog pensivepeter.wordpress.com LinkedIn www.linkedin.com/in/pensivepeter Twitter @pensivepeter P.O. Box 49719, Los Angeles, CA 90049, USA Tel: +1.310.694.2278