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[Paul Lipton <tosca-interop@lists.oasis-open.org>]

Hi Richard, Thanks for the iteration. FYI, there were actually a number of minor and some medium level tweaks, as well, to sentences, e.g. for a minor one, don’t call the demo “the OASIS demo,” but rather “This OASIS demo,” unless you never think we’ll have another OASIS demo. :-) More seriously, please bear with me, as I will have to take a look later today. Could you please confirm (offline if you want) that you based this on my second upload (revision #2) at https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/tosca-interop/download.php/50444/OASIS%20TOSCA%20Interop%20Demo%20-%20Abstract%20-%202013-08-26%20PL2.docx ? If anybody wants Richard and me to take this often line, just let us know, of course. Thanks, Paul From: tosca-interop@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:tosca-interop@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Richard Probst Sent: Monday, August 26, 2013 2:26 PM To: tosca-interop@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: [tosca-interop] Groups - OASIS TOSCA Interop Demo - Abstract - 2013-08-26 RP3.docx uploaded Submitter's message Paul, if we want to put the value proposition first, we can do that. However, I think that this will require a little more editing than simply changing the order of sentences, so I am not comfortable with this revision. In the spirit of rapid iteration, here is a revision to your revision. Best, --Richard -- Mr. Richard Probst Document Name : OASIS TOSCA Interop Demo - Abstract - 2013-08-26 RP3.docx No description provided. Download Latest Revision Public Download Link Submitter : Mr. Richard Probst Group : TOSCA Interoperability SC Folder : Documents Date submitted : 2013-08-26 11:26:00 Revision : 3