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Groups - TOSCA Abstract for ODCA Forecast Panel 2014-06-16a.docx uploaded

From: Karsten Beins <[email protected]>
To: [email protected]
Date: Mon, 23 Jun 2014 10:55:00 -0000

Hi Paul, First of all, sorry for having missed your deadline on last Friday due to my holidays last week. In your draft I think you have already mentioned most of the key aspects that we had identified while working on the CIO slide deck. As expected for such a compact abstract, many sentences are very heavyweight and cause a need of multiple reading (at least for me). Just an observation, no need to change, I think. There are two aspects that I’m still missing a bit: - In paragraph #2 dependency descriptions are not only needed between application components but also regarding infrastructure hardware and software components. Depending on the role of a visitor infrastructure dependencies may be of high interest. You actually touch on that aspect vaguely in paragraph #3 , but it’s pretty hidden in my mind. - TOSCA enables automated requirement-to-capability matching. This is a key TOSCA feature laying the foundation for the “truly competitive ecosystem” that you correctly highlight. Admitted that this is a somewhat more technical aspect, but technically focused people are part of our target audience on ODCA Forecast. I think so far you don’t mention this aspect at all, therefore I’d suggest to try adding it somewhere in paragraph #3. Thanks, Karsten From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Lipton, Paul C Sent: Monday , June 16, 2014 11:28 PM To: Lipton, Paul C; [email protected] Subject: RE: [tosca-interop] Groups - TOSCA Abstract for ODCA Forecast Panel 2014-06-16a.docx uploaded Dear (interop) TOSCA-teers, As agreed in today’s SC meeting (June 16 th ), please find the below document (track changes) for your comments and suggestions. Would you please provide your comments no later than Friday. As asked, I will provide merged version for discussion/revision/approval on our Interop SC meeting of June 23rd. Thanks, Paul From: [email protected] [ mailto:[email protected] ] On Behalf Of Paul Lipton Sent: Monday, June 16, 2014 5:26 PM To: [email protected] Subject: [tosca-interop] Groups - TOSCA Abstract for ODCA Forecast Panel 2014-06-16a.docx uploaded Document Name : TOSCA Abstract for ODCA Forecast Panel 2014-06-16a.docx Description Abstract for TOSCA presentation as part of ODCA Forecast 2014 Conference panel. Download Latest Revision Public Download Link Submitter : Mr. Paul Lipton Group : TOSCA Interoperability SC Folder : Documents Date submitted : 2014-06-16 14:26:07