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[PATCH 1/5] introduction: tweak text as suggested by pbonzini
Cornelia Huck <[email protected]> writes:
> On Thu, 30 Jan 2014 18:10:23 +0200
> "Michael S. Tsirkin" <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>> explicitly say driver/device or use passive form
>> as appropriate.
>>
>>
Cc: Arun Subbarao <[email protected]>
>> Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <[email protected]>
>> ---
>> content.tex | 18 ++++++++++
--------
>> 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
>>
>
>> @@ -663,12 +664,12 @@ device), so we keep a counter of how many we've added:
>> \subsubsection{Updating The Index Field}\label{sec:General Initialization And Device Operation / Device Operation / Supplying Buffers to The Device / Updating The Index Field}
>>
>> Once the index field of the virtqueue is updated, the device will
>> -be able to access the descriptor chains we've created and the
>> +be able to access the descriptor chains that driver created and the
>
> s/driver/the driver/ ?
>
> (also in various places below)
Yes, by my count there are four. With that changed:
Acked-by: Rusty Russell <[email protected]>
Thanks,
Rusty.
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