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[PATCH 1/5] introduction: tweak text as suggested by pbonzini


Cornelia Huck <[email protected]> writes: > On Thu, 30 Jan 2014 18:10:23 +0200 > "Michael S. Tsirkin" <[email protected]> wrote: > >> explicitly say driver/device or use passive form >> as appropriate. >> >> Cc: Arun Subbarao <[email protected]> >> Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <[email protected]> >> --- >> content.tex | 18 ++++++++++ -------- >> 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) >> > >> @@ -663,12 +664,12 @@ device), so we keep a counter of how many we've added: >> \subsubsection{Updating The Index Field}\label{sec:General Initialization And Device Operation / Device Operation / Supplying Buffers to The Device / Updating The Index Field} >> >> Once the index field of the virtqueue is updated, the device will >> -be able to access the descriptor chains we've created and the >> +be able to access the descriptor chains that driver created and the > > s/driver/the driver/ ? > > (also in various places below) Yes, by my count there are four. With that changed: Acked-by: Rusty Russell <[email protected]> Thanks, Rusty.

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