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[PATCH] editorial: update S390 Common I/O link

From: Cornelia Huck <[email protected]>
To: [email protected]
Date: Tue, 10 May 2022 13:30:00 -0000

On Tue, May 10 2022, "Michael S. Tsirkin" <[email protected]> wrote: > Paul Knight wrote: > > In running a link check, I noted several issues, none significant for this > initial public review publication: > - broken link in Normative references: > -- [S390 Common I/O] ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM > Publication SA22-7204, > http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS, and any > future revisions > (This link is currently broken, and I could not find any alternative source for > this document. - please rewrite the reference to indicate document is no longer > available at this link. You may also consider whether the solitary citation at > 4.3.1.3 is still needed.) > This broken link is not a blocking issue for a Committee specification Draft, > but it will not be allowed for a Committee Specification. > > Reported-by: Paul Knight <[email protected]> > Suggested-by: Halil Pasic <[email protected]> > Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <[email protected]> > --- > introduction.tex | 3 ++- > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) > > diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex > index 4dc7085..0a78e78 100644 > --- a/introduction.tex > +++ b/introduction.tex > @@ -45,7 +45,8 @@ \section{Normative References}\label{sec:Normative References} > IDentifier (UUID) URN Namespace'', RFC 4122, DOI 10.17487/RFC4122, > July 2005. \newline\url{http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4122.txt}\\ > \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 PoP}\textbf{[S390 PoP]} & z/Architecture Principles of Operation, IBM Publication SA22-7832, \newline\url{http://publibfi.boulder.ibm.com/epubs/pdf/dz9zr009.pdf}, and any future revisions\\ > - \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204, \newline\url{http://publibfp.dhe.ibm.com/cgi-bin/bookmgr/BOOKS/dz9ar501/CCONTENTS}, and any future revisions\\ > + \phantomsection\label{intro:S390 Common I/O}\textbf{[S390 > +Common I/O]} & ESA/390 Common I/O-Device and Self-Description, IBM Publication SA22-7204-01, \newline\url{https://www.ibm.com/resources/publications/OutputPubsDetails?PubID=SA22720401}, and any future revisions\\ Ok, in the context diff I see that we don't use any suffix for the PoP, so I guess that we shouldn't use a suffix here, either. > \phantomsection\label{intro:PCI}\textbf{[PCI]} & > Conventional PCI Specifications, > \newline\url{http://www.pcisig.com/specifications/conventional/},