Re: [wsbpel-primer] updated primer and notes from our call today

[Dieter Koenig1 <dieterkoenig@de.ibm.com>]

Hi Diane, thanks. It is now in CVS as revision 1.12.

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             Diane Jordan                                              
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Hi Dieter, Here is the updated primer draft to be posted to cvs:
I made changes discussed on the call today as follows:
      updated date in title
      fixed name and date on footers
      removed section 8.2 - next steps
      added line numbers
      deleted Appendix A - faq
      deleted note in acknowledgements section
Other notes from our call today.  Monica, John, Dieter, Alex, Charlton,
Khanderao attended.
We decided the primer is ready for the first pass review by the TC.  I will
post it and send an email requesting comments with a summary of the
outstanding work items we're aware of now:
      Chapter 7 may contain too much information about the constructs
      rather than the application.  An attempt was been made to cut out as
      much descriptive material as seemed appropriate.  Alex and Charlton
      will review together and see if more can be done.
      Also in chapter 7, should the entire process be discussed.  Charlton
      will work on this while the initial review is going on.
      Chapter 3 should be moved to become section 7.1.
      Section 7.1.2.4 is not completed yet
      Section 6.2.3 (Abstract process profile for templates) should have a
      sentence added saying there's an example in the spec.
      We need to verify that no internal cross references are broken by the
      changes in sections.

John will complete merging of the questions from the webinar into the faq
and send it to the TC for review.
I will send him the link to the latest xhtml to verify whether there are
any formatting problems that need fixing for the oasis standard version.


Regards, Diane
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