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[Ludwig Seitz <ludwig@axiomatics.com>]

Hello all, here are more observations on cd-1 core-spec. Nothing fundamental again, just 'nits-to-pick'. /Ludwig ================================================== page 13 reference [XACMLAdmin] "... FIXME URL" should be fixed ;-) page 26, section 4.1.1 Example policy, line [a6], and page 28, line [b4], and page 29, line [c2], and page 30, line [e4], and page 37, line [h6] "...xacml/FIXME.xsd" should be fixed. page 26, section 4.1.1 Example policy, lines [a30-32], and page 32, lines [f17-20], and page 33, lines [f45-48], [f56-59], [f70-73], and page 35, lines [g20-23], [g56-59], [g67-70], and page 36, lines [g80-83], [g93-96], and page 37, lines [h25-28], and page 38, lines [h47-50], [h62-65], [h76-79], [h88-91], and page 40, lines [i28-31], [i41-44] and page 41, lines [i52-55], [i65-68], [i76-79], and page 42, lines [j19-22] The AttributeDesignators are missing the mandatory xml-attribute "MustBePresent". page 27, lines 996-997 "The version attribute is omitted, ..." It is not omitted, this sentence should be replaced with a description of the version attribute. page 28, lines [b2-4], and page 30, lines [e2-4]. The mandatory xml-attribute "ReturnPolicyIdList" is missing. page 28, lines [b7], [b16], [b23], and page 30, lines [e7-8], and page 31, lines [e12-13], [e19-20], [e37], [e43], [e50]. The attributes in the example requests are missing the mandatory xml-attribute "IncludeInResult". page 32, lines [f2-f8], and page 42, lines [j30-33] The mandatory xml-attribute "Version" is missing page 49, line 2184 the URI for XPath 1.0 should be http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/REC-xpath-19991116 not http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/Rec-xpath-19991116 -- Ludwig Seitz, PhD | Axiomatics AB Training & Development | Electrum 223 Phone: +46 (0)703 83 08 00 | S-164 40 Kista, Sweden Mail: ludwig@axiomatics.com |