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[Paul Tyson]

Section 1.3 * Correct namespace reference (refers to wd-13) Section 1.4 * [LDAP-1] reference and hyperlink should point to "...rfc2256.txt" (now "...rfc2798.txt") * [MathML] remove or update date in citation because date of hyperlinked document is 21 October 2003. * [RBAC] hyperlink does not lead to link to referenced paper. NIST RBAC site is now http://csrc.nist.gov/groups/SNS/rbac/standards.html, but I didn't find Ferraiolo & Kuhn paper there. * [RegEx] schema primer is now at 2nd edition, dated 28 October 2004. * [XACMLv1.0] and [XACMLv1.1] hyperlinks lead to members-only links on oasis site. Is that intended? Section 2.3 * Next-to-last paragraph: change "behaviour" to "behavior". Section 3.3.2 * Delete 3.3.2.1 and 3.3.2.3 (these are duplicated in 3.3.2.5 and 3.3.2.6). Remaining 3.3.2 subsections will be renumbered. Change title of current 3.3.2.5 from "Obligation expressions" to "Obligations". Section 3.3.3.2 * In first sentence, change "obligations expressions" to "obligation expressions". Section 5.30 I suggest moving most of this material to section 7.3, Attribute Evaluation. I will post proposed rewrites to sections 5.30 and 7.3 in a separate email. Section 5.42 * 2nd paragraph: "...if the PDP implements multiple resources profile..." should be "...multiple decision request profile..." * 2nd paragraph: Delete last two sentences, starting with "Each child element...". These add nothing to the discussion of the