editorial comments on draft

id            ED-1

title         Typographical, grammatical cleanup

status        Unassigned

topic         admin

class         Editorial

document      wd-asap-spec-01d.doc

section

raised by     John Fuller

owner

description

p1,  (line 31)   <missing period>

p4,  (line 107)  "An SOAP"

p9,  (line 291)  "how a work it performed"

p10, (line 322)  "used for all the regular purpose such as"

p10, (line 345)  ?? should "xmlns:aws" read "xmlns:as" ??

p15, (line 544)  "A collection elements"

p16, (line 589)  <incomplete sentence>

p16, (line 592)  "that will explains"

p23, (line 934)  <Ending tag should match>

p25, (line 1001) "ResutData"

proposal

p1,  (line 31)   <add period>    

p4,  (line 107)  "A SOAP"

p9,  (line 291)  "how the work is performed"

p10, (line 322)  "for"

p10, (line 345)  ?? "xmlns:as" ??

p15, (line 544)  "A collection of elements"

p16, (line 589)  <complete the thought>

p16, (line 592)  "which explains"

p23, (line 934)  <ex: Change /as:Instance to /as:InstanceKey>

p25, (line 1001) "ResultData"

resolution

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id            ED-2

title         Completeness, Introduce "AWS" abbreviation

status        Unassigned

topic         admin

class         Editorial

document      wd-asap-spec-01d.doc

section

raised by     John Fuller

owner

description

AWS used in text not defined in terminology

proposal

Edit line 222, in 1.6 Terminology,

Replace "Asynchronous webservice" with "Asynchronous web service (AWS)"

resolution

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id            AS-1

title         Completeness, Define Priority element type

status        Unassigned

topic         admin

class         Editorial

document      wd-asap-spec-01d.doc

section       4.3, 5.4

raised by     John Fuller

owner

description

Sections 4.3 and 5.4 reference a Priority element without providing

a reference.

proposal

Define the data type for the priority element

or indicate it is "to be defined"

resolution