[OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (CAMP-109) 4.3.1 General Attributes

[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/CAMP-109?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

Martin Chapman  updated CAMP-109:
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    Proposal: 
accept Patrick's replacement to not use the term element;

change: 

The following nodes may appear as elements of the Plan, Artifact Specifications, or Service Specifications.

to:

Deployment Plans, Artifact Specifications and Service Specifications
can contain the nodes defined in 4.3.1 General Attributes.



  was:
accept Patrick's replacement to not use the term element;

change: 

The following nodes may appear as elements of the Plan, Artifact Specifications, or Service Specifications.

to:

Deployment Plans, Artifact Specifications and Service Specifications
may contain the nodes defined in 4.3.1 General Attributes.
[ed note should this be a normative may?]



> 4.3.1 General Attributes
> ------------------------
>
>                 Key: CAMP-109
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/CAMP-109
>             Project: OASIS Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Public Review
>            Reporter: Gilbert Pilz
>            Assignee: Gilbert Pilz
>
> Patrick Durusau submitted the following PR comment (https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/camp-comment/201309/msg00054.html):
> The text of 4.3.1 General Attributes reads:
> *****
> The following nodes may appear as elements of the Deployment Plan,
> Artifact Specifications, or Service Specifications.
> *****
> Which is puzzling because 4.3 Deployment Plan Schema provides (last
> sentence):
> *****
> Note the description of the structures and
> information in this section utilizes YAML's nomenclature.
> *****
> In addition to needing to be a note, there is a claim that YAML
> nomenclature is being used.
> I mention that because of:
> "...may appear as elements of the..."
> YAML does not use the term "elements."
> If keeping the hanging paragraph for 4.3.1 General Attributes is
> important, I would say:
> *****
> Deployment Plans, Artifact Specifications and Service Specifications
> may contain the nodes defined in 4.3.1 General Attributes.
> *****

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