Re: [cmis] CMIS work product review

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I'm familiar with rules limiting behavior. :)  Here's the zip

(See attached file: CMIS-cd04.zip)

-Al

Al Brown

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Mary McRae ---10/19/2009 11:30:28 AM---Hi Al,    I can't take anything out of SVN (not that I'm not capable, but our

From:	Mary McRae <>

To:	Al Brown/Costa Mesa/IBM@IBMUS

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Date:	10/19/2009 11:30 AM

Subject:	Re: [cmis] CMIS work product review

Hi Al,

  I can't take anything out of SVN (not that I'm not capable, but our rules prevent it). Please export the fixed version of the specification and either attach to email or upload to Kavi.  

Thanks!

Mary

On Oct 19, 2009, at 2:22 PM, Al Brown wrote:

Mary,

The changes are reflected in the specification - http://tools.oasis-open.org/version-control/browse/wsvn/cmis/trunk/Specification/CMIS%20Specification.doc. I was not able to find sample namespace documents under the link you provided. What is necessary for them?

-Al

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<graycol.gif>---10/15/2009 01:45:56 AM---Mary, thank you for your detailed comments/instructions. To our Editors: Please update the spec per

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Date: 10/15/2009 01:45 AM

Subject: RE: [cmis] CMIS work product review

Mary, thank you for your detailed comments/instructions.

To our Editors: Please update the spec per Mary's instructions at your

earliest convenience. Thanks. Since this is primarily a format change to

conform to OASIS requirements, TC voting on these changes is not needed..

To all: Once we revised the spec, we will conduct another formal ballot

to approve it as a Committee Draft, and approve its submission for

Public Review. Thank you for your patience.

BTW, my network connectivity in the next several days is a bit

uncertain. I'll check email whenever I can.

Regards,

david

-----Original Message-----

From: Mary McRae [mailto:] 

Sent: Wednesday, October 14, 2009 6:25 PM

To: Eric S. Chan; Al Brown

Cc: Sabine Ocker; CMIS List

Subject: [cmis] CMIS work product review

The following issues have been idientified in the submitted work  

products and must be corrected before they can be uploaded to

docs.oasis-open.org 

:

1. Creation of a master document (Content Management Interoperability  

Services Version 1.0) that contains all common information and  

references the 3 separate components.

Note all changes in all documents should be accepted before publishing.

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Domain Model:

1. Title should be as follows:

Content Management Interoperability Services Version 1.0

Part 1 - Domain Model

2. Status:

Committee Draft 01 (or whatever number is appropriate; should be  

consecutive)

3. Specification URIs

This Version:

Please see URI Generator for assistance in determining

(http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uri-block-generator.php 

)

Also, one of the 3 formats must be declared as authoritative (noted by  

the word 'Authoritative' in parens following the specific URL)

Previous Version:

Should be 'N/A'

Latest Version:

Should be version-agnostic URIs

4. OASIS Technical Committee

Please spell out the full name of the committee; also hypertext link  

should point to TC public home page

5. Related work:

This is meant for related OASIS work only

6. Namespaces:

This should be a hypertext link; also need namespace document (see  

templates at http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates)

7. Abstract:

Remove references to files in svn. Any/all references must be to fixed/ 

static versions either in docs.oasis-open.org or Kavi.

8. Status:

Hypertext links behind physical URLs do not match the named locations.

9. Notices:

Copyright should be 2009

"CMIS" should be added after "OASIS" where it's noted [insert specific  

trademarked names and abbreviations here]

No other modifications are allowed to the Notices section. (You might  

want to place CMIS logo usage information in an appendix)

10. Footer:

document identifier should match filename without extension

Date is improperly formatted

Page # of # should be right-justified

11. References

Still contains OASIS boilerplate templates

12. Section 4 Schema

Says placeholder. Recommend moving schema to appendix; note separate  

schema file will take precedence over any schema incorporated into the  

specification file.

13. Conformance Section

Needs to actually be numbered.

14. Acknowledgements:

Only TC Members can be listed in the specification.

Note that Associate members are not entitled to have their company  

name listed. Associate members can most easily be identified by  

looking at the roster and seeing whether their company is a hyperlink  

or just plain text. Associates will not be hyperlinked (Ektron, EsoCE- 

NET, Greenbytes, FatWire)

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Restful AtomPub Binding

1. Title should be as follows:

Content Management Interoperability Services Version 1.0

Part 3 - Restful AtomPub Binding

2. Status:

Committee Draft 01 (or whatever number is appropriate; should be  

consecutive)

3. Specification URIs

This Version:

Please see URI Generator for assistance in determining

(http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uri-block-generator.php 

)

Also, one of the 3 formats must be declared as authoritative (noted by  

the word 'Authoritative' in parens following the specific URL)

Previous Version:

Should be 'N/A'

Latest Version:

Should be version-agnostic URIs

4. OASIS Technical Committee

Hypertext link should point to TC public home page

5. Namespaces:

This should be a hypertext link; also need namespace document (see  

templates at http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates)

6. Status:

Hypertext links behind physical URLs do not match the named locations.

7. Notices:

Copyright should be 2009

"CMIS" should be added after "OASIS" where it's noted [insert specific  

trademarked names and abbreviations here]

8. Footer:

document identifier should match filename without extension

Date is improperly formatted

9. References

Need URL for CMISDM

10. Conformance Section

Needs to actually be numbered.

11. Acknowledgements:

Only TC Members can be listed in the specification.

Note that Associate members are not entitled to have their company  

name listed. Associate members can most easily be identified by  

looking at the roster and seeing whether their company is a hyperlink  

or just plain text. Associates will not be hyperlinked (Ektron, EsoCE- 

NET, Greenbytes, FatWire)

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Web Services Binding

1. Title should be as follows:

Content Management Interoperability Services Version 1.0

Part 2 - Web Services Binding

2. Status:

Committee Draft 01 (or whatever number is appropriate; should be  

consecutive)

3. Specification URIs

This Version:

Please see URI Generator for assistance in determining

(http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uri-block-generator.php 

)

Also, one of the 3 formats must be declared as authoritative (noted by  

the word 'Authoritative' in parens following the specific URL)

Previous Version:

Should be 'N/A'

Latest Version:

Should be version-agnostic URIs

4. OASIS Technical Committee

Hypertext link should point to TC public home page

5. Namespaces:

This should be a hypertext link; also need namespace document (see  

templates at http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates)

6. Status:

Hypertext links behind physical URLs do not match the named locations.

7. Notices:

Copyright should be 2009

"CMIS" should be added after "OASIS" where it's noted [insert specific  

trademarked names and abbreviations here]

8. Footer:

document identifier should match filename without extension

9. References

Need URL for CMISSCHEMA

Remove boilerplate citation notice

10. Conformance Section

Needs to actually be numbered.

11. Acknowledgements:

Only TC Members can be listed in the specification.

Note that Associate members are not entitled to have their company  

name listed. Associate members can most easily be identified by  

looking at the roster and seeing whether their company is a hyperlink  

or just plain text. Associates will not be hyperlinked (Ektron, EsoCE- 

NET, Greenbytes, FatWire)

Regards,

Mary

Mary P McRae

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