Boilerplate change suggestion

Hi,

Coming new to
the spec, I found the following boilerplate in STIX difficult to wrap my
mind around:

"The reverse
relationships (relationships "to" the Infrastructure object)
are included as a convenience. For their definitions, please see the objects
for which they represent a "from" relationship."

In particular,
the clause "for which they represent a 'from' relationship" took
several moments to grok and I don't believe that I am alone based on some
discussions.

I would like to
propose the following alternative text:

Reverse relationships
indicate relationships targeting this object by other objects. They are
included here for convenience. For their definitions, please see the "Source"
object. 

Thanks!

Emily

Emily
Ratliff
STSM, IBM Security Research Initiative Lead

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