Re: [EXT] Re: [cti] Boilerplate change suggestion

I like the change as well.  We will get this put in to the documents.

Bret

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Subject: [cti] Re: [EXT] Re: [cti] Boilerplate change suggestion

 

Hi Emily,

 

I also like it.  Bret and I will make the change 
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                Rich P.

 

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Date: Thursday, April 25, 2019 at 1:47 PM

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Subject: [EXT] Re: [cti] Boilerplate change suggestion

 

I second Sean;s comments.  Your description is much clearer and easier to understand.

 

 

Paul Patrick

 

 

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Date: Thursday, April 25, 2019 at 1:13 PM

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Subject: Re: [cti] Boilerplate change suggestion

 

I like your proposed change. 

 

Sean Barnum

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FireEye

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Date: Thursday, April 25, 2019 at 12:34 PM

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Subject: [cti] Boilerplate change suggestion

 

Hi,

Coming new to the spec, I found the following boilerplate in STIX difficult to wrap my mind around:

"The reverse relationships (relationships "to" the Infrastructure object) are included as a convenience. For their definitions, please see the objects for which they represent a "from" relationship."

In particular, the clause "for which they represent a 'from' relationship" took several moments to grok and I don't believe that I am alone based on some discussions.

I would like to propose the following alternative text:

Reverse relationships indicate relationships targeting this object by other objects. They are included here for convenience. For their definitions, please see the "Source" object.

Thanks!

Emily

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