The original needs to be rewritten. Technically, one needs to
read it as "The element ... was ..."
How about "Indicates the element from which the content of the
<required-cleanup> element was migrated. This provides
authors context for determining how the migrated content should be
tagged."
Best,
Kris
Kristen James Eberlein
Chair, OASIS DITA Technical Committee
Principal consultant, Eberlein Consulting
www.eberleinconsulting.com
+1 919 682-2290; kriseberlein (skype)
On 8/31/2017 3:33 PM, Eliot Kimber
wrote:
If you rephrase
it as “Indicates the element from which the contents of the
<required-cleanup> element were mapped” then I think
it becomes clearer that “contents were mapped” is the
correct construction.
Unless I’m
completely misreading the original, in which case its needs
to be rewritten so that it can’t be misread.
Cheers,
E.
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Eliot
Kimber
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From: <>
on behalf of Eliot Kimber <>
Date: Thursday, August 31, 2017 at 9:17 AM
To: DITA TC <>
Subject: Re: [dita] Errata 02 item: Grammar glitch
in <required-cleanup>
I don’t agree
with this change: contents … were is correct in my opinion.
Cheers,
E.
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Eliot
Kimber
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From: <>
on behalf of Kristen James Eberlein
<>
Date: Wednesday, August 30, 2017 at 10:00 PM
To: DITA TC <>
Subject: [dita] Errata 02 item: Grammar glitch in
<required-cleanup>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/dita/dita/v1.3/errata01/os/complete/part3-all-inclusive/langRef/base/required-cleanup.html#required-cleanup
Currently:
@remap
Indicates the element that the contents of the
<required-cleanup> element were mapped from
(provides an idea about what the new intent should be).
Should be (at a minimum):
@remap
Indicates the element that the contents of the
<required-cleanup> element was mapped from
(provides an idea about what the new intent should be).
A more exhaustive rewrite probably is in order.
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Best,
Kris
Kristen James Eberlein
Chair, OASIS DITA Technical Committee
Principal consultant, Eberlein Consulting
www.eberleinconsulting.com
+1 919 682-2290; kriseberlein (skype)
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