Feedback about "Lightweight DITA: An Introduction" change-marked draft

The subtitle should be "Committee Note 01"

      

      
The date needs to be the date on which the TC will vote on the
        committee note: 23 January 2018

      
The file name should be "LwDITA-v1.0-cn01". (The easiest way
        to handle this is to rename the DITA map.)

      
In "Specification URIs":

      
        
The content currently in "This version" should move to
          "Previous version".

        
The URLs for "This version" need to be as follows (changes
          indicated in red):

        
          
http://docs.oasis-open.org/dita/LwDITA/v1.0/cnd01/LwDITA-v1.0-cn01.html (Authoritative)

            

          
http://docs.oasis-open.org/dita/LwDITA/v1.0/cnd01/LwDITA-v1.0-cn01.pdf

        
      
      
Use symbols for
            the revision marking, in addition to color. This is
            important for TC members who are color blind or who are
            printing the document out on a black and white printer. I'd
            look at the DITAVAL files that we use for the errata version
            of the spec.

      
There are extra
            spaces before some instances of the word "component".

      
I think changing
            instances of the word "elements" to "components" makes this
            document read VERY strangely. I am not on-board with
              this change, especially when the references are to
            XDITA or XDITA.

          

    
    
Best,

      Kris

      

      Kristen James Eberlein

      Chair, OASIS DITA Technical Committee

      Principal consultant, Eberlein Consulting

      www.eberleinconsulting.com

      +1 919 682-2290; kriseberlein (skype)

      

    

    
On 1/18/2018 1:21 PM, Carlos Evia
      wrote:

    

    
      
        
          

             Document Name:
              Lightweight DITA: An Introduction

               Description

              Marked version with changes implemented after public
              review #1. Thanks to

              Alan Houser for the transform. 

              Download Latest Revision

              Public Download Link

               Submitter:
              Dr. Carlos Evia

              Group: OASIS Darwin Information Typing
              Architecture (DITA) TC

              Folder: Drafts

              Date submitted: 2018-01-18 10:20:42