Examples of reworked navtitle topic

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<navtitle> topic in DITA 1.3 Errata 02

      
<navtitle> topic after phase one editing -- Note that I
        included some material using line-through that I usually would
        have just removed. I thought it might be useful to see content
        that refers to older versions of the spec (or deprecated stuff)
        that we don't want to bring forward to DITA 2.0.

      

      
<navtitle> topic after phase two+ editing -- Note I have
        done some substantial editing here.

    
    
FYI, Robert has not seen the latest changes on the topic; he
      might have some changes to suggest!

    

    
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      Best,

      Kris

      

      Kristen James Eberlein

      Chair, OASIS DITA Technical Committee

      Principal consultant, Eberlein Consulting

      www.eberleinconsulting.com

      +1 919 622-1501; kriseberlein (skype)

      

    

  

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