Hi Robert,
I have reviewed the PDF and I have no comments. Looks good to me.
You may wish to fix the PDF stylesheet to remove âOracle Cloud Infrastructureâ from the footers. It should
probably say âOASIS Openâ or whatever weâre supposed to use nowadays.
Since Iâll be late to the TC meeting, Iâm sending my feedback by email.
Cheers,
Gershon
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From: <> on behalf of Robert Anderson <>
Date: Tuesday, 1 September 2020 at 0:21
To: "" <>
Subject: [dita] Stage 3 proposal: split syntax diagrams from programming domain
Iâm attaching the Stage 3 proposal for issue 361 to split syntax diagrams (and now syntax phrases) from the programming domain.
Thanks to Deb and Frank for reviews. Frank noted one thing, which is that the domain token (syntaxdiagram-d) is more verbose than many of the original ones (such as âpr-dâ that it used to have). I tend to
link the more verbose ones better in this case, and it follows the pattern of more recent domain tokens, such as âditavalref-dâ. We should discuss whether others prefer a more abbreviated token in this case.
Thanks,
Robert