RE: [ebcore] Re: Required changes to submitted specification PartyIdType-1.0-cd02

Thank you Pim, Mary, and Kim!

 

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From: Kim Goolsby 
[mailto:] 
Sent: Tuesday, April 13, 2010 
7:56 AM
To: Pim van der Eijk
Cc: 
; Mary McRae
Subject: Re: [ebcore] Re: 
Required changes to submitted specification 
PartyIdType-1.0-cd02

Hi Pim,

The spec look great. All versions are now available for viewing at docs.oasis-open.org.

Thank you,

Kim

On Tue, Apr 13, 2010 at 3:54 AM, Pim van der Eijk <> 
wrote:

  

  
 

  
Hello 
  Kim,

  
 

  
I hope I 
  have now covered all your additional editorial comments as 
  well.

  

  
 

  
Pim

  

  
  From: Kim Goolsby [mailto:] 
Sent: 06 April 2010 
  17:31
To: 
Cc: Mary 
  McRae
Subject: [ebcore] Re: Required changes to submitted 
  specification PartyIdType-1.0-cd02

  

  

  

  
Lastly, 
  #9. The spec must always have a version number (OASIS ebCore Party Id 
  Type Technical Specification Version 1.0).

  
On Tue, Apr 6, 2010 at 11:26 AM, Kim Goolsby <> wrote:

  
    
Please find below a list of required changes to the 
    submitted spec, PartyIdType-1.0-cd02. To help you with the URI section, the 
    following links provide useful information: 
    

    
      
The OpenOffice specification template
http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/OASISSpecificationTemplateV3.2.ott 

      
The URI Generator
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uri-block-generator.php 

      
The URI Tutorial Movie
http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/videos/URIs.mov

    

    
This document needs to be changed as follows:

    

    
      
Specification 
      URIs (in general):
These must point to locations at docs.oasis-open.org as shown in the specification 
      template (http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/OASISSpecificationTemplateV3.2.ott). 
      If you're having difficulties constructing the proper pathing, feel free 
      to take advantage of the URI generator (http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uri-block-generator.php).

Note that 
      all three formats must be provided/noted: editable source (odt in this 
      case), html and pdf.

      
Previous 
      Version:
Since this is the first time this document is being uploaded 
      to docs.oasis-open.org, it should say 
      'N/A'.

      
There 
      is no such heading as 'Previous Approved Version'; please refer to the 
      specification template and the URI generator for proper metadata 
      labels and URIs.

      
Technical 
      Committee:
Please hypertext link the name of the TC to the public 
      homepage as done in the specification template.

      
Related 
      Work: 
Please add hypertext links to the OASIS references (and, if 
      possible, non-OASIS references).

      
Footer: 
Please 
      remove the file extension (.odt) from the filename and remove the brackets 
      from around the date.

      
Notices: 
Please 
      remove the text within the square brackets and replace with any specific 
      names, abbreviations, etc. as appropriate.

      
References: 
The 
      Oasis references are not in the correct citation format. Please 
      change to the citation format shown in the specification template. 
      

For example:
[EDXL-HAVE] 
      OASIS Standard, “Emergency Data Exchange Language (EDXL) Hospital 
      AVailability Exchange (HAVE) Version 1.0”, November 2008.
http://docs.oasis-open.org/emergency/edxl-have/os/emergency_edxl_have-1.0-spec-os.doc

      
Acknowledgements: 
      The Acknowledgements section is required.

    

    

    
Please let me know if you have any questions.

    

    
Thanks,

    
Kim

    

-- 
Kim Goolsby
Publications Specialist
OASIS: 
    Advancing open standards for the information society
email:  
web: www.oasis-open.org
phone: 
  1.734.223.6890

-- 
Kim 
  Goolsby
Publications Specialist
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the 
  information society
email:  
web: www.oasis-open.org
phone: 
  1.734.223.6890

-- 

Kim Goolsby
Publications Specialist
OASIS: Advancing open standards 
for the information society
email:  
web: 
www.oasis-open.org
phone: 
1.734.223.6890