RE: [ebcore] Changes Required to Submitted Document ~ ebCore-PartyIdType-1.0 Committee Draft 03

Hi 
Kim,

 

Yes, 
please ignore whatever version you had in JIRA and use the updated 
version.

 

Pim 

From: Kim Goolsby 
[mailto:] 
Sent: 19 August 2010 
23:48
To: Pim van der Eijk
Cc: 

Subject: Re: [ebcore] Changes Required to 
Submitted Document ~ ebCore-PartyIdType-1.0 Committee Draft 
03

Hi Pim,

The old version is attached to TCADMIN-224; that's the one I checked. 
 In your attached file, all changes are made. Since I'm new to this, I'll 
ask: Shouldn't this attached file replace the one in JIRA? In any case, yes, 
this spec is fine. Thanks much for letting me know. 

Best,

Kim

On Thu, Aug 19, 2010 at 5:37 PM, Pim van der Eijk <> wrote:

  

  

  
I'm sorry Kim, but did you 
  download the latest version of the ZIP file from:

  
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ebcore/download.php/39046/cd03.zip

  
 

  
That version does not 
  seem to have any of the issues you report on below.

  
 

  
It looks like you have 
  reviewed (a second time) the latest but one version from:

  
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ebcore/download.php/38800/cd03.zip

  
 

  
The Kavi page of all 
  versions of this document is:

  
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ebcore/document.php?document_id=39046

  
You need to download 
  the latest updated version.

  
 

  
Pim

  

  
  From: Kim Goolsby [mailto:] 
Sent: 19 August 2010 
  22:06
To: 
Subject: [ebcore] 
  Changes Required to Submitted Document ~ ebCore-PartyIdType-1.0 Committee 
  Draft 03

  

  

  

  

TCADMIN-224 
  

  
Please 
  make the following changes to this document: 

1. In the 'This 
  Version' section, the underlying links are incorrect. Please change them from 
  CD02 to CD03. 

2. Also in 'This Version', the html file has an 
  extra 'x'. Please change from 'xhtml' to 'html'. 

3. In 'Previous 
  Version', the html file has an extra 'x'. Please change from 'xhtml' to 
  'html'. 

4. In 'Related Work', the links do not go directly to the 
  documents. For OASIS ebXML Messaging Services (ebMS) Version 2.0, please 
  change the link to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/ebxml-msg/documents/ebMS_v2_0.pdf. 

5. 
  In 'Related Work', the links do not go directly to the documents. For OASIS 
  ebXML Messaging Services (ebMS) Version 3.0 Part 1: Core Features, please 
  change the link to http://docs.oasis-open.org/ebxml-msg/ebms/v3.0/core/ebms_core-3.0-spec.pdf. 

Suggestion: 
  You can remove the period at the end of this list item. 

6. In 
  'Related Work', the links do not go directly to the documents. For OASIS 
  Collaboration-Protocol Profile and Agreement (CPP/A) Technical Specification 
  Version 2.0, please change the link to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/ebxml-cppa/documents/ebcpp-2.0.pdf. 

Suggestion: 
  You can remove the period at the end of this list item. 

7. In 
  'Related Work', the links do not go directly to the documents. For OASIS 
  Universal Business Language (UBL) Version 2.0, please change the link 
  to http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/cs-UBL-2.0/UBL-2.0.html. 

8. 
  In 'Non-normative References', the link for [EBMS2] does not go directly to 
  the document. Please change from http://www.oasis-open.org/specs/#ebxmlmsgv2 to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/ebxml-msg/documents/ebMS_v2_0.pdf. 

9. 
  In 'Non-normative References', the link for [EBMS3CORE] does not go directly 
  to the document. Please change from http://www.oasis-open.org/specs/#ebxmlmsgv3 to http://docs.oasis-open.org/ebxml-msg/ebms/v3.0/core/ebms_core-3.0-spec.pdf. 

  

  
Thank 
  you,

  
Kim
-- 
Kim 
  Goolsby
Publications Specialist
OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for 
  the information society
email:  
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  1.734.223.6890

-- 
Kim 
Goolsby
Publications Specialist
OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for 
the information society
email:  
web: www.oasis-open.org
phone: 
1.734.223.6890