Re: ebXML: TA doc

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From: Jeff Suttor <[email protected]>
To: <[email protected]>
Sent: Thursday, September 07, 2000 1:54 AM
Subject: ebXML: TA doc


> Anders, could you please forward this to the list?  The list will not let
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> Date: Wed, 06 Sep 2000 16:43:05 -0700 (PDT)
> From: Jeff Suttor <[email protected]>
> Subject: ebXML: TA doc
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> feedback on the latest doc:
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> - we shouldn't specify implementation details like the name of files
> - 6.5.3
> - 6.5.4
> - move 7.3 to the appendix
> - move 8.3 to the appendix
> - 9.2 (para 5) is too specific when it mentions OASIS
> - 9.3 (para 5) "     "
> - 10.4.2 pick one char set
> - 10.6.e mention of CGI is too implementation specific
> - 10.8.3 fig x.x mentions magic file name again, let the implementors
>   decide
> - 10.10.b remove 8 bytes comment, let implementors decide
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> it is also too long. should be a shorter doc with a few simple figures.
we
> should be showing high level architecture.  could we focus on just showing
the
> components, how they fit together and what they expose at their edges?
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> Thanks,
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