comments on Serm's

Title: comments on Serm's

Monica, Serm:

Here is my iteration on the latest full version, addressing Serm's remarks.

(see <JD2> tags, that you'll have to remove after accepting the changes if appropriate).

I do not have a problem with other edits.

I assume, Monica, that you are the acting editor for the main body of the spec...

(we still need Mike's additions)

Regards,

jacques

 <<BIP0.9.zip>> 

BIP0.9.zip