Technical whitepaper comments

Team,

 

            Here are some comments on the messaging section of the
technical overview.   I’ll look at the rest over the next week for any
further comments.

 

ebXML Technical Overview 

 

Comments

 

  
  
Location

  
  
  
Comment/Issue

  
  
  
Suggested change

  
  
  
Priority

  
 

 

  
  
General

  
  
  
Difficult to find things

  
  
  
Add page number/ section numbers/ contents

  
  
  
Final edit issue

  
 

 

  
  
Page 3 / Messaging Overview

  
  
  
“The ebMS was developed to provide for secure”

  
  
  
Change “for” to “the” 

  
  
  
Low

  
 

 

  
  
Page 3 / Messaging Overview

  
  
  
Support for FTP is not widespread

  
  
  
Remove “FTP”

  
  
  
Medium

  
 

 

  
  
Page 4 / Overview

  
  
  
Message exchange patterns. Need to reference
  multiple exchange patterns – this is referenced in the later section but
  needs higher priority

  
  
  
Change to be “Multiple message exchange
  patterns including push and pull that map to different type of business
  transactions.”

  
  
  
Medium

  
 

 

  
  
Page 4 / Last section

  
  
  
Multi-hop may not be supported in version 3.0

  
  
  
Remove last sentence from paragraph.

  
  
  
High

  
 

 

  
  
Page 5 / after V3.0 before Business scenario

  
  
  
Add the list of referenced specs for V3.0.  This may
  be moved form Page 4 Overview

  
  
  
Add The following spec. references

  
WS-I Basic Profile, WS-I attachment profile (Jacques what exactly
  is this called?), WS-Security, WS-Reliability…

  
  
  
Low

  
 

 

  
  
General

  
  
  
We need to come up with a cover page that has some
  impact but is simple to understand

  
  
  
Add a cover with the title of ebXML Technical
  overview with a jigsaw with each piece labelled with an ebXML component
  between to buildings or such like.

  
  
  
Low – Final edit

  
 

 

  
  
 

  
  
  
 

  
  
  
 

  
  
  
 

  
 

 

 

Ian Jones

Chair ebXML Messaging Services TC