David,
I
think we are talking about different documents. This was John's EML
Implementation Guide, rather than the WOTE paper.
Regards
Paul
-----Original Message-----
From: David RR Webber (XML)
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Sent: 01 June 2006 17:00
To: Paul
Spencer
Cc: eml; John Borras
Subject: RE:
[election-services] EML Implementation Guide
Paul,
Actually John has to remove a couple of pages already because of their
restriction on 8 page limit. So we can actually add more in - one page
summarizing all the schemas and their purpose - and then the other showing the
XML structure for the 440 cast vote were cut.
I'd suggest adding more pages to round out the overall as well -
including some of the process diagrams from the spec' would be helpful - we
did not really touch on the operational aspects of managing an election.
Thanks, DW
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Subject: [election-services] EML Implementation
Guide
From: "Paul Spencer" <>
Date:
Thu, June 01, 2006 11:06 am
To: "John Borras"
<>
Cc: "eml"
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John,
This
looks like a good paper. I am wondering whether it is a bit long as
an
introduction, or rather short as a detailed implementation guide. It
seems
closer to the former, in which case I think I would take out the
rather busy
diagrams. I have less detailed versions if you think
something is needed. In
this case, I might move the Terminology section
later as well.
In terms of detail, at an editorial level, I would
remove the "eg"s and use
words like "such as" instead. CORE was also
renamed a while ago as the
Co-ordinated Online Record (not Register) of
Electors.
Regards
Paul Spencer
Director
Boynings
Consulting
Ltd
http://boynings.co.uk
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