RE: [emergency-adopt-docs] Presentation Guidelines slides

Title: RE: [emergency-adopt-docs] Presentation Guidelines slides

I agree with Doug's suggestion on how to deal with Patrick's find (yet another good catch:).

For Doug's slides however I think we should add an Item like "Further References" to the Summary slide.

 

Werner

From: Doug Allport [mailto:]
Sent: Wed 5/5/2010 9:58 AM
To: 
Subject: RE: [emergency-adopt-docs] Presentation Guidelines slides

May I suggest that these 2 new slides be included in the template deck Rex
proposed, and that they are not needed in the deck I submitted...which I'm
still viewing as a presentation to the TC's, with the objective of having
them buy into the effort. With their buy-in, we can then provide a template
for any TC related presentation, and that it start with Patrick's two new
slides. 

Doug Allport

-----Original Message-----
From: Patrick Gannon [mailto:]
Sent: May-05-10 11:33 AM
To: 
Cc: 
Subject: RE: [emergency-adopt-docs] Presentation Guidelines slides

Rex,

My apologies for not bringing this up before. During the recent reviews, I
had been focused on the proposed content.

However in re-reviewing the latest slides, I noticed that we did not have a
title slide.  The first slide had the same layout as the rest of the slides.
I went back to the slides that I had used at the NIEM event and pulled out
the title slide and first slide about OASIS.

Please review the attached to see if you want to replace the first slide you
were using with the first 2 slides in this version of the guidelines deck.

Patrick Gannon

-----Original Message-----
From: Rex Brooks [mailto:]
Sent: Tuesday, May 04, 2010 1:52 PM
To: Joerg, Werner
Cc: 
Subject: Re: [emergency-adopt-docs] Presentation Guidelines slides

That makes 3 of 5.

Cheers,
Rex

Joerg, Werner wrote:
> I reviewed Doug's new posting and agree to accept it as replacement.
>
> Werner
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Rex Brooks [mailto:]
> Sent: Tuesday, May 04, 2010 12:36
> To: Joerg, Werner
> Cc: 
> Subject: Re: [emergency-adopt-docs] Presentation Guidelines slides
>
> Good catch Werner,
>
> This makes sense to me. So if you, Doug, Patrick and Rob can just
> ratify
>
> the change, we should be good to go.
>
> Cheers,
> Rex
>
>  wrote:
>  
>> As I review the slides that we just approved to forward to the
>> EMA-TC,
>>    
> I notice that we missed updating slide #10 - I think it should be
> modified to reflect the new order: Adoption, Benefits, Features.
>  
>> Given that this is an oversight, we should be able to remedy the
>> issue
>>    
> without having to reconvene the SC. I'd like to suggest that Doug
> makes the changes on the posted document and then all those who voted
> for moving the document out of SC, recast their vote by e-mail to Rex.
>  
>> Rex, let us know if this process is ok.
>>
>> (BTW: Doug - do not worry about posting the doc to the TC. The SC's
>>    
> document folder is shared with the TC and hence shows under the
> document
> page.)
>  
>> Werner
>>  
>>    
>
>  

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