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Thanks Norm,
That blank linespace
has been taken care of, Acknowledgments changed and I added the
revision history, so I'll upload wd04 momentarily.
In case anyone needs to
know I'll be out on chores and errands in about an hour or so,
and won't be available till late afternoon Pacific Time.
Thanks to All,
Rex
On 10/8/2021 11:24 AM, Paulsen,Norm
(ECCC) wrote:
1)
Line 252 appears to me as an extra blank line between
numbered bullets 10 and 11 in section 2.7 when all the other
numbered bullets in this section do not have this blank
line.
2)
I would have to get the diagram for “Contagious Disease”
created. The student, that has all that in her work folders,
is back in on Tuesday. So if we decide on a title, she’ll be
able to get that done first thing Tuesday (to keep the
diagram fonts/sizes/colours etc.. consistent with all other
diagrams).
I’m
ok with Contagious Disease.
Norm
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To: Paulsen,Norm (ECCC)
<>;
; Jacob Westfall
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Subject: Last minute changes Re: [emergency-cap]
Groups - etl-v1.0-cn01-wd03.docx uploaded
Hi
All,
There
was a previously missed item that I couldn't find: Line 252.
I noted the changes I found immediate ly below my signature.
I had to search around the line numbers since they change
between versions.
I
think we (Norm) need to come up with a solution for
Section
3.4 – Spectrum = Infectious Disease / Action… seems like it
should be retitled if we voted down Infectious Disease.
we can also use
"disease", "disease outbreak" and "contagious disease". I
vote for "contagious disease".
I
want to upload this asap, so if I don't hear back on this in
an hour or so, I'll upload with the note that we have a
couple of changes we need to decide on.
Please
get back to me soon since we're going for a ballot over the
weekend. We can still change to Monday if we absolutely must
.
Cheers,
Rex
There
are a few things, like extra spaces in text, that are in all
copies and were just spotted now…
Line
44 'if' to 'of'
Line
46 Extra space before "Consumers.."
Line
252 ?
Line
564 Extra space between "cases" and "the"
Line
720 Extra space between "were" and "designed"
On 10/7/2021 8:51 PM, Paulsen,Norm (ECCC)
wrote:
Using
the line numbers found in the wd03 document, here’s the
list…
I
can call you and show you these with a video call earlier
before the 11 am meeting. I will log in at 9 am and check
if and when you’d like to do that. We can use my Zoom.
Many
of these you will be able to see right away from the
listing below, but the yellow stuff will just be easier to
show you.
Line
156 - extra blank
Line
189 – capital letter
Line
288 – extra period
Line
302 - extra ‘s’ on the word ‘distribution’
Line
312 - the snippet “for this element” is present in WD03,
but had been removed in the re-write.
Line
330 – missing comma
Line
338 – “as broad or narrow” should be “is broad or narrow”
Lines
343-352 – (section 3) 4 word tweaks not incorporated
Line
354-407 – (section 3.1) 9 word tweaks and corrections not
incorporated
Line
417 – missing the word “anticipated”
Line
468 – sentence ends with 4 periods
Line
569 - capital letter
Line
574 - capital letter
There
are a few things, like extra spaces in text, that are in
all copies and were just spotted now…
Line
44 'if' to 'of'
Line
46 Extra space before "Consumers.."
Line
252 ?
Line
564 Extra space between "cases" and "the"
Line
720 Extra space between "were" and "designed"
Images
Section
3.2 - Spectrum = Fire / Time, not copied over from my
draft to yours
Section
3.3 – Spectrum = Fire / Urgency, not replaced from my
draft to yours with… Spectrum Fire / Impact
Section
3.4 – Spectrum = Infectious Disease / Action… seems like
it should be retitled if we voted down Infectious Disease.
OET-200
in appendix B, should be “transport issue”
Appendix
C missing this latest revision
Norm
From: Rex Brooks
<>
Sent: October 7, 2021 3:15 PM
To: Paulsen,Norm (ECCC) <>
Cc: Jacob Westfall <>;
Elysa Jones
<>
Subject: Re: [emergency-cap] Groups -
etl-v1.0-cn01-wd03.docx uploaded
Hi
Norm,
I
hope it's not endless, but...
Please
send them over tonight. It's unlikely I'll get to them
since I've turned into a bit more of a sundowner in the
last few years, and I'd rather not do these last changes
tonight. However, if I have an idea of how many changes
other than a revised Acknowledgements, I can adjust my
schedule to accommodate this.
I've
always been a morning person and my performance is better
in those hours... So I'd rather be safe than sorry.
We
may want to have a special SC meeting to get its approval
of these changes so that we have it properly minuted. I
would not be in favor of a "with pending changes" tacked
onto the approval tomorrow.
A
special meeting could be Monday anytime for me or Tuesday
before the TC meeting.
Cheers,
Rex
On 10/7/2021 11:17 AM, Paulsen,Norm
(ECCC) wrote:
Rex..
I
did a comparison and yes there are several misses to
report….
For
example…
1.
Section
2, line 5, extra blank
2.
Section
2, line 6, extra space and extra period.
3.
Section
2.9, line 11, extra ‘s’ on the word ‘distribution’
4.
Section
2.10, line 8, the snippet “for this element” is present
in WD03, but had been removed in the re-write.
5.
Etc…
There
are a number of these.
I
can easily show them tomorrow, or do you want them fully
listed like the above and sent over tonight. I could do
that after 10pm tonight.
Norm
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etl-v1.0-cn01-wd03.docx uploaded
Submitter's message
This is a new Working Draft wd03. I've done my best, but
we know there's always something a mere human will miss.
Let's gather up any edits, changes and corrections so that
with the addition of revised Acknowledgements, I can put
together one more improved working draft for approval. It
would be good if we could come close to wrapping up those
last changes Friday 8 October 2021 for approval at next
Tuesday's EMTC Meeting 12 October 2021 for the CAP
Workshop and IAEM.
Rex
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