Re: [emergency-cap] Re: wd04

Thanks Norm,

    
I'll update the TOC and
        upload the revision very soon.

    
Cheers,

        Rex

    

    
On 10/11/2021 10:26 AM, Paulsen,Norm
      (ECCC) wrote:

    

    
      
      
      
      
      

        
My comparison
            came back clean. All good.

        
 

        
Noted… for all
            the other stuff. 
          J

        
 

        
Norm

        
 

        

          

            
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Norm,

        
I
            didn't touch the TC Front Matter. I'm not sure about that so
            I am including Chet for the question of changing copyright
            notice to 2021. Chet, could you also advise us on the matter
            of keeping a version of the document with all markup left in
            for the purpose of having a redline supporting a change log
            that will largely be links to the changes documented in Jira
            where each issue also includes the date of the meeting notes
            where the changes are minuted.

        
Norm,
            I will add a revision with new TOC, replacing existing
            document in the SC Committee Notes folder. I should probably
            wait until you've done your comparison, or do you want the
            revision with the updated TOC uploaded before you do the
            comparison? 

        
I
            left the markup in so changes can be checked more easily
            than it is with a revision that has accepted all changes for
            a clean copy. I will do that before submitting the whole
            package to TC Admin requesting publication after the TC
            votes positively (we hope) to approve the Event Terms List.

        
Elysa,
            should we ask for expedited TC Admin processing so that we
            have the TC final and the TC Admin final document?

        
Cheers,

            Rex

        

          
On 10/11/2021 9:18 AM, Paulsen,Norm
            (ECCC) wrote:

        

        
          
Rex

          
 

          
The copyright
              notice still says 2020. Is that correct?

          
 

          
The table of
              contents is not up to date.

          
 

          
The document
              is marked with all the changes? Was it supposed to be?

          
 

          
I will do a
              look through and comparison in the morning.
            

          
 

          
Norm

          
 

          
 

          

            

              
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                  Sent: October 8, 2021 10:35 PM

                  To: Paulsen,Norm (ECCC) <>;
                  

                  Subject: [emergency-cap] Re: wd04

            

          

          
 

          
Norm,

          
I note that I completed the changes inline below with "--Done" except for the second
            "Line 369"  which I believe was just a transposition for
            "Line 396" where I made the change.

          
Rather than make a new working draft, I replaced the
            existing version with a new revision without a new filename.
            I will continue this for any further changes.

          
Cheers,

            Rex

          

            
On 10/8/2021 6:29 PM, Paulsen,Norm
              (ECCC) wrote:

          

          
            
Rex

            
 

            
In wd04

            
 

            
Line 352 – the word ”an” should be
              “the” 
                --Done

            
Line 353 – should be… (i.e. a “wind”
              event leading to a “wind” alert)
              --Done

            
Line 367 – missing the word “all”,
              should be…all associated to a “tropical storm” event.
              --Done

            
Line 368 – two spaces at the end of the
              line 
                --Done

            
Line 369 – two spaces after… However 
                --Done

            
Line 369 – should be… “smoke” event  (took a bit of looking, but I
                think this should be Line 396) --Done

            
Line 403 – missing comma after the word
              “both” 
                --Done

            
Line 404 – The word Practices should
              start a new paragraph 
                --Done

            
 

            
An extra entry in Appendix B... OET-144
              Heavy Rain --Done and the code was automatically corrected
              

            
1.      
                Not sure how that got
              inserted in there. Its not even alphabetical so something
              seems wrong.

            
 

            
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