FW: Section 3 tweaking

Thanks for these suggestions, which I am incorporating into WD27

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Sent:  Tuesday, August 16, 2011 4:01 PM
To:  Considine, Toby (Campus Services IT)

Subject:  Section 3 tweaking

Some suggested verbiage tweaks for section 3 and eliminated a broken doc link.



Gerald R. Gray, PhD
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Section 3 Energy Interoperation Architecture verbiage tweaking.doc