RE: First editing pass online

Hi Norm:

The dtd as given is a fragment, lacking the document declaration, and a
container.  Secondly, '%uriReference;' is not defined as a parameter entity
with an attlist, so our recommendation will have an ambiguity.

On another suject, that of the path identifier, would it not be better to
state that the search path for the catalog resource to be: 

'catalogueOwnerURI, catalogueServerLocationURI,   catalogueOffsetURI'

[so that the hints about the catalog are included in the name of the
resource]

instead of: 

'publicIdentifier, partialPublicIdentifier'

The two issues may be handled together:

*****************************
<!-- catalog resourced names include the hint about location.-->
<!ELEMENT %uriReference; EMPTY>
<!ATTLIST &uriReference;
	catalogueOwnerURI			CDATA		#REQUIRED
	catalogueServerLocationURI	CDATA		#REQUIRED
	catalogueOffsetURI		CDATA		#REQUIRED >
*****************************

Regards;
David Leland

-----Original Message-----
From: Norman Walsh [mailto:]
Sent: Thursday, February 01, 2001 12:24 AM
To: 
Subject: First editing pass online


Hi folks,

I've made a quick editing pass over the spec and posted a new update[1].
I hope to make another pass before Monday, but...

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

[1] http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/entity/
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