Re: First editing pass online

At 19:24 2001 01 31 -0500, Norman Walsh wrote:
>I've made a quick editing pass over the spec and posted a new update[1].

>[1] http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/entity/spec.html

I've gone through and made comments by marking up the 
html (red&struck-through -> delete, yellow -> add, 
lime&italic -> commentary) which I attach to this message.

paul