[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (MQTT-36) Editorial comments on Connect Payload

Editorial comments on Connect Payload
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                 Key: MQTT-36
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-36
             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
          Issue Type: Improvement
          Components: edits
            Reporter: Peter Niblett
            Priority: Trivial


1. I know we provide our definition of "UTF-8 encoded strings in 2.1.3, however readers of the first para of 3.13 (line 667) might not realise this. We should either say "length-prefixed UTF-8 encoded strings" or "UTF-8 encoded strings as defined in 2.1.3". 

2. Line 676 says (when talking about the Client Identifier) "It is the key in handling Message Identifiers for messages with QoS levels 1 and 2". The phrase "key in handling" looks a bit odd,  and in any case the Client Id is used as a key to all state held on the server for the client, not just some kind of scoping construct for message Ids.

3. Line 677 2 instances of unicode should be Unicode

4. Line 684 says "The Client Identifier might have been presented to the client implementation as a Unicode string" and then goes on to talk about surrogate characters.  Surrogate characters are not valid Unicode, so can't appear in a Unicode string.  What you should have said is "The Client Identifier might have been presented to the client implementation as a UTF-16 encoded string [RFC2781]" 

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