[OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (MQTT-45) summary of editorial issues from read through of WD07

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Richard Coppen updated MQTT-45:
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    Description: 
line 35: change TCPIP network, to operating environment
line 42: remove bracketed section 
line 254: remove "allows applications to exchange messages with specific levels of reliability. It" and restructure introduction sentence for clarity
line 292: make it clear that the DUP flag must be set to 0 if  QOS 0 messages

  was:
line 35: change TCPIP network, to operating environment
line 42: remove bracketed section 


> summary of editorial issues from read through of WD07
> -----------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: MQTT-45
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-45
>             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: edits
>    Affects Versions: 3.1.1
>            Reporter: Richard Coppen
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 3.1.1
>
>
> line 35: change TCPIP network, to operating environment
> line 42: remove bracketed section 
> line 254: remove "allows applications to exchange messages with specific levels of reliability. It" and restructure introduction sentence for clarity
> line 292: make it clear that the DUP flag must be set to 0 if  QOS 0 messages

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