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[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (MQTT-127) Duplicate Framwork Profile figure in Security Document

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[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (MQTT-127) Duplicate Framwork Profile figure in Security Document
Duplicate Framwork Profile figure in Security Document
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                 Key: MQTT-127
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-127
             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
          Issue Type: Improvement
          Components: SecuritySC
            Reporter: Peter Niblett


In WD03 The same picture appears both in in Section 4 (Figure 1) and 5,14 (this one doesn't have a figure number).  It seems unnecessary to have it twice

I found it easier to understand what's going on in 5.14, as there is some context around it, whereas I found section 4  all a bit abstract as someone not familiar with NIST (and if I were familiar with NIST I would not need chapter 4 anyway since I understood it anyway).

I suggest deleting figure 1. You could then remove section 4 altogether (as it is already rather short), merging the material that it contained into 1.3.3 or into the example (as appropriate)

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