[OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (MQTT-179) Usage - whilst?

[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-179?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

Richard Coppen updated MQTT-179:
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    Affects Version/s: 3.1.1
          Component/s: edits

Let's say what we mean

Section 3.1.2.4

"messages that were published whilst it was disconnected." --> "messages that were published during the time that it was disconnected."

> Usage - whilst?
> ---------------
>
>                 Key: MQTT-179
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-179
>             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: edits
>    Affects Versions: 3.1.1
>         Environment: Grammar
>            Reporter: Patrick Durusau
>            Priority: Trivial
>
> A minor point but under 3.1.2.4 Clean Session, under a non-normative comment, the following occurs:
> *****
> QoS 2 messages that were published whilst it was disconnected.
> *****
> Whereas elsewhere you use While and while. 
> Likely to be confusing to translators. A style thing but I would make it "while." 

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