[OASIS Issue Tracker] (MQTT-207) Update to abstract

[ https://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-207?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

Richard Coppen updated MQTT-207:
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    Description: 
Current abstract: 

"The purpose of this document is to assist MQTT implementors into applying the NIST Cybersecurity Framework focused on MQTT security targeted to the regulatory requirements of their organization."

Propose:

"This document provides guidance for organisations wishing to deploy MQTT in a way consistent with the NIST Framework for Improving Critical Infrastructure Cybersecurity."

  was:
Current abstract: 

"The purpose of this document is to assist MQTT implementors into applying the NIST Cybersecurity Framework focused on MQTT security targeted to the regulatory requirements of their organization."

Propose:

"This document serves as a starting point for organizations wishing to deploy MQTT in a way consistent with the NIST Framework for Improving Critical Infrastructure Cybersecurity."

       Proposal: This document provides guidance for organisations wishing to deploy MQTT in a way consistent with the NIST Framework for Improving Critical Infrastructure Cybersecurity.

> Update to abstract
> ------------------
>
>                 Key: MQTT-207
>                 URL: https://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-207
>             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: SecuritySC_edits
>            Reporter: Richard Coppen
>
> Current abstract: 
> "The purpose of this document is to assist MQTT implementors into applying the NIST Cybersecurity Framework focused on MQTT security targeted to the regulatory requirements of their organization."
> Propose:
> "This document provides guidance for organisations wishing to deploy MQTT in a way consistent with the NIST Framework for Improving Critical Infrastructure Cybersecurity."



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