[OASIS Issue Tracker] (MQTT-341) Shared Subscription edits

Brian Raymor created MQTT-341:
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             Summary: Shared Subscription edits
                 Key: MQTT-341
                 URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/MQTT-341
             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
          Issue Type: Bug
          Components: edits
    Affects Versions: 5, wd10
            Reporter: Brian Raymor
             Fix For: 5, wd10


382 A Shared Subscription comprises a Topic Filter and *a* Subscription Options.

and Subscription Options

This is a bit of a run-on sentence:

382 ... A Shared Subscription can
383 be associated with more than one Session and an Application Message that matches a Shared
384 Subscription is only sent to the Client of one of these Sessions.

how about:

A Shared Subscription can be associated with more than one Session.
An Application Message that matches a Shared Subscription is only sent to the Client of one of these Sessions.



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