1. Please change “Operational Support Systems” to “Operations
Support Systems”. The latter is the historically correct expansion
of “OSS”.
2. In the list of efforts which follows “For example, for
the Telecom service layer:”, please add:
- ITU-T Recommendation Y.2234, “Open
Service Environment Capabilities for Next-Generation Networks”, which
aims ”to enable
enhanced, flexible service creation and provisioning”.
(I would recommend inserting that reference prior to the existing
reference to the OMA OSE.)
Cheers,
BobN
