[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (OBIX-84) Line 69, editorial, change passive voice to active voice

Line 69, editorial, change passive voice to active voice
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                 Key: OBIX-84
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/OBIX-84
             Project: OASIS Open Building Information Exchange (oBIX) TC
          Issue Type: Improvement
          Components: OBIX 1.1 Specification
    Affects Versions: SOAP WD07
            Reporter: Chris Bogen
            Priority: Trivial


In lines 69-70,
"Missing from the standard oBIX WSDL is the service element. This element binds a SOAP server instance with a network address."

The first sentence is in an awkward passive voice and the second sentence uses "with" when "to" is more appropriate.

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