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RE: [obix] Minor items noted during production of your CSs
Next stage? It’s a Committee Spec. We considered our work on these specifications done. tc “It is the theory that decides what can be observed." —Albert Einstein Toby Considine Phone: (919)962-9073 Information Technology Services University of North Carolina Chapel Hill, NC Email: Chair, OASIS OBIX Technical Committee Chair, OASIS WS-Calendar Technical Committee Editor, OASIS EMIX, Energy Interoperation TC From: Chet Ensign [mailto:] Sent: Wednesday, October 7, 2015 8:11 AM To: Considine, Toby <> Cc: Paul Knight <>; Subject: Re: [obix] Minor items noted during production of your CSs Hi Toby - Sorry. I guess I missed that in the ballot. These are all minor changes from my perspective. They can just be updated when you move to your next stage. /chet On Tue, Oct 6, 2015 at 5:57 PM, Considine, Toby <> wrote: <sigh> We had multiple conversations about the Namespace prior to public review. I’m glad they were found now, and we asked the TC Admins to fix prior to publication. Authorization to do so was specifically authorized in our vote. </sigh> The encodings should all use the latest namespace. Again, as authorized in the vote. COAP upgrade is a nice catch. If asked as requested, we would have moved from draft to final Acme to example is an agreeable change. No Anvils required. As you have now published before resolving, or perhaps did not do the checking before publishing final review, we will need to make a vote on Non-significant corrections after the publication. Would you advise on the proper procedures for that? DO we need another special majority vote? tc “It is the theory that decides what can be observed." —Albert Einstein Toby Considine Phone: (919)962-9073 Information Technology Services University of North Carolina Chapel Hill, NC Email: Chair, OASIS OBIX Technical Committee Chair, OASIS WS-Calendar Technical Committee Editor, OASIS EMIX, Energy Interoperation TC From: [mailto:] On Behalf Of Chet Ensign Sent: Tuesday, October 6, 2015 5:25 PM To: Cc: Paul Knight <> Subject: [obix] Minor items noted during production of your CSs Members of the OBIX TC, While publishing your new Committee Specifications, we noted the following issues that you may wish to address at the next publication cycle. - OBIX v1.1 The W3C link checker found a broken link to local resource hyperlinked to the word "OASIS" in the Non-Normative reference to "CamelCase". This should be removed. Also, the links below are not broken, but the document does not use the exact URL, and the links are redirected. It may be a good idea to link to the final location, for the sake of speed. - warning Line: 2797 http://www.w3.org/TR/PNG redirected to http://www.w3.org/TR/PNG/ Status: 301 -> 200 OK The link is missing a trailing slash, and caused a redirect. Adding the trailing slash would speed up browsing. - warning Line: 2795 http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/REC-PNG-20031110 redirected to http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/REC-PNG-20031110/ Status: 301 -> 200 OK The link is also missing a trailing slash, and caused a redirect. Adding the trailing slash would speed up browsing. - Encodings for OBIX: Common Encodings Version 1.0 We noted that the Section 2.6 discussion of namespaces uses "http://docs.oasis-open.org/obix/ns/201410/def" instead of either http://docs.oasis-open.org/obix/ns/201410/schema (as defined in Section 2.5) or http://docs.oasis-open.org/obix/ns/201506/schema (as currently defined for OBIX v1.1 (csd04/csprd04/cs01)). You may want to check to see if this is correct. The examples in Section 4.2 and 4.3 should not use "acme.com", which is a real website. Please replace them with example.com, a url created for exactly this purpose. - Bindings for OBIX: REST Bindings Version 1.0 In the Non-Normative references, the CoAP reference should cite the RFC instead of Internet draft. The Pinger link check found a broken link for tje non-normative reference to CoAP-OBSERVE. It looks like the Internet draft cited has expired. The TC should update the reference. - Bindings for OBIX: SOAP Bindings Version 1.0 Should this document reference the updated OBIX schema and namespace (http://docs.oasis-open.org/obix/ns/201506/schema) instead of http://docs.oasis-open.org/obix/ns/201410/schema) as it does now. Please let us know if you have any questions on these. -- /chet ---------------- Chet Ensign Director of Standards Development and TC Administration OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society http://www.oasis-open.org Primary: +1 973-996-2298 Mobile: +1 201-341-1393 -- /chet ---------------- Chet Ensign Director of Standards Development and TC Administration OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society http://www.oasis-open.org Primary: +1 973-996-2298 Mobile: +1 201-341-1393
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