[OASIS Issue Tracker] Issue Comment Edited: (ODATA-329) Approve Editoral Changes

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Stefan Drees edited comment on ODATA-329 at 4/8/13 7:54 AM:
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Thanks Mike for these changes that IMO really augment the readability of it. So I second the proposal to accept these changes.

Upon reading I happened to further change and comment inside the document [OData Core Part 1: Protocol, Version 4.0](https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/48762/odata-core-v4.0-wd01-part1-protocol-current-2013-4-5MP.docx) as provided on the sky driven scratch folder (by Ralf) and as part of my weekly review.

      was (Author: sdrees):
    Thanks Mike for these changes that IMO really augment the readability of it. So I second the proposal to accept these changes.

Upon reading I happened to further change and comment inside the document [OData Core Part 1: Protocol, Version 4.0](https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/48762/odata-core-v4.0-wd01-part1-protocol-current-2013-4-5MP.docx) and tried to attach that version with filename odata-core-v4.0-wd01-part1-protocol-current-2013-04-06-sdrees.docx to this issue. I was not able to do so. Will provide it thus per mail to the editor (Mike)
  
> Approve Editoral Changes
> ------------------------
>
>                 Key: ODATA-329
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ODATA-329
>             Project: OASIS Open Data Protocol (OData) TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: OData Protocol 
>    Affects Versions: V4.0_WD01
>         Environment: [Proposed]
>            Reporter: Michael Pizzo
>             Fix For: V4.0_WD01
>
>
> The following version of the protocol document contains significant non-technical editorial changes:
> https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/odata/download.php/48762/odata-core-v4.0-wd01-part1-protocol-current-2013-4-5MP.docx
> These changes were made to improve consistency and readability, remove redundancy, and address other editorial issues in the document, and include (but are not limited to)
> -ordering http headers alphabetically
> -adding missing http headers
> -reworded data model section
> -added missing error codes (501, 304,...)
> -rearranged sections ($select, $expand, $format shouldn't be nested under querying collections)
> -moved information on declaring and advertising actions/functions to a common section.
> These changes should all be editorial in nature.

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