RE: [odata] TC Admin comments on OData CSPRD01s

Thanks Chet for the review comments!

 

We will address these ASAP as a PR comment from the TC administration.

 

I have opened a JIRA ticket
https://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ODATA-377 to capture this.

 

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On Behalf Of Chet Ensign

Sent: Tuesday, May 7, 2013 1:38 PM

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Cc: Paul Knight

Subject: [odata] TC Admin comments on OData CSPRD01s

 

Members of the OData TC, 

 

During preparation of your CSDs and CSPRDs for OData, OData Atom Format and OData JSON Format, Versions 4.0 approved 26 April 2013 we noticed a number of broken links and wanted to bring them to your attention during the public review. 

 

- In OData Version 4.0, we found several internal broken links that are now rendered 'Error! Reference source not found.' Some of these may simply be a result of editorial changes that changed the bookmark name. 

 

- In OData Atom Format and OData JSON Format, we also found broken references 'Error! Reference source not found.' It looks like these may have been cross-document links to [OData-Protocol].  

 

- In OData Atom Format at Section 7.1 we noted a problem with the reference to [OData-ABNF]. And in OData JSON Format at Section 19 with the reference to [RFC5646]. In both cases, it looks like the reference pulls in text from the preceding
 reference in the Normative References section.

 

- In OData Version 4.0, in Section 12.1.3 we noted a link that was to a resource on an individual's computer. This link to OData Intermediate Conformance Level that pointed:

 

file:///C:/Users/mikep/Documents/OASIS/OData%20Service%20Conformance%20Levels.docx#_OData_Data_Service

 

We hope you find these comments useful in improving the draft as you move forward. 

 

Please let us know if you have any questions on these. 

 

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/chet 

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